Various meanderings with a rhyme in there somewhere.
Perhaps it wouldn'tHave been such a trick if he'dInstead tried a lim'rick.
Ha. That is too funny, Charlie.
I can't believe I screwed it up again! Strike "a" from the final line...but you get the idea.
Well, exactly. The idea was what made me laugh. I suspect that counting syllables just doesn't feel natural in English, even though the Japanese do it.
Perhaps it wouldn't
ReplyDeleteHave been such a trick if he'd
Instead tried a lim'rick.
Ha. That is too funny, Charlie.
ReplyDeleteI can't believe I screwed it up again! Strike "a" from the final line...but you get the idea.
ReplyDeleteWell, exactly. The idea was what made me laugh.
ReplyDeleteI suspect that counting syllables just doesn't feel natural in English, even though the Japanese do it.